Cool. Refreshing. Inviting.
I called Anoop, he told me what to do.
(Connecting 2 ind. clauses w/ a coma)
I usually drink too many band smoothies and get a stomach ache how about you?
Vague pronoun reference
Bobby told Viet to give back the goxing glove before he hit him with it.
This is not acceptable in formal writing.
As soon as I get home I will complete my math portfolio, email my girl friend and my history essay needs to be written.
comma in compound sentence
Nick is going to the movie and then he is going to Crispers.
Through interior monologue the author is able help make the reader aware of a character's thoughts.
Literary present tense
Raskolnikov rang the bell at Alyona's flat.
Faulty possessive pronoun
The extraordinary man theory and it's ramifications figure prominently in the novel.
Phillip is to never work in the kitchen area again.
I have a window I like to lean out of.
There are 27 students in 7th period.
The show opens with a musical number and involved fireworks.
Neither of the landladies reveals their personal opinions through interior monologues.
Sonia, who Raskolnikov loves, is alienated from society throughout most of the novel.
Katerina Marmeladov is the character that has consumption and ultimately dies.
A primary example of interior monologue is where Raskolnikov is talking to Porfory.
Crime and Punishment is a novel of psychological realism.
Raskolnikov doesn't realize that he loves sonia until he is in prison in Siberia.