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bad: JK Rowling, a British novelist, whose fame as an innovator in the field of fantasy may come to equal that of JRR Tolkien.
good: JK Rowling is a British novelist whose fame as an innovator in the field of fantasy may come to equal that of JRR Tolkien.
Bad: Many students work after school and on weekends, consequently they do not have much
time for homework.
Run-on Sentences (Comma-splices)
Good: Many students work after school and on weekends so they do not have much time for
Bad: Each of the tests are numbered.
Lack of Agreement between the subject and verb
Good: Each of the tests is numbered.
Bad: Everyone needs their notebook for tomorrow.
Lack of Agreement between the pronoun and its antecedent
Good: Everyone needs his notebook for tomorrow.
*-----------any, anybody, anyone, each, either, every, everybody, everyone, neither, nobody, no one, somebody, someone are always singular pronouns
Bad: After I worked for a month, I asked for a day off.
Good: After I had worked for a month, I asked for a day off.
*----------esp. past tense and past perfect tense
Bad: If I was president, things would be different.
Misuse of the Subjunctive Mood (contrary to fact)
Good: If I were president, things would be different.
Bad: Joe is taller than the other kids in his class.
Bad: I wonder which vacation place is best: Hawaii or the Bahamas?
Incorrect Comparison of Adjectives
Good: Joe is taller than any other kid in his class.
Good: I wonder which vacation place is better: Hawaii or the Bahamas?
Bad: I did good on my test
Bad: I feel badly about the accident.
Misuse of Adjectives & Adverbs (linking verb)
Good: I did well on my test.
Good: I feel bad about the accident.
Bad: Driving along the highway, the mountain came into view.
Bad: Returning to Brophy after nearly 25 years, the campus seemed much more beautiful.
Good: Driving along the highway, I saw the mountain.
Good: Returning to Brophy after nearly 25 years, the alum thought the campus seemed much more beautiful.
Bad: I like fishing, sailing and golf
Lack of Parallelism
Good: I like fishing, sailing and golfing.
Bad: The principle reason he left his job was its low pay.
Word Choice/Diction (the wrong word or the wrong form of the word)
Good: The principal reason he left his job was its low pay.
Bad: Anyone who is conversant about car engines can tell what's wrong with yours.
Good: Anyone who is conversant with car engines can tell what's wrong with yours.
Bad: You should come with Mike and I when we hike down into the Grand Canyon.
Good: You should come with Mike and me when we hike down into the Grand Canyon.
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