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(1) I had been looking forward to Nanas visit for months. (2) She came all the way to California from Ohio every August. (3) She was so much fun. (4) She and I did something special together every year. (5) A week before her visit, my cousin invited me to come with his family to Yellowstone National Park. (6) I had never been there before, and I couldn't believe I had the chance to go. (7) Only after the phone call did I realize that the trip was the exact same week Nana was coming. (8) In the end, I weighed the pros and cons and decided to stay for Nana. (9) I only saw her twice a year. (10) Besides, Yellowstone will always be there for me to visit. (11) I had to make a decision.
Which revision would you make to sentences 2 , 3 , and 4 to make the writing more interesting?
A. Change the verb tense.
B. Vary the sentence beginnings.
C. Put them in a different order.
D. Add punctuation.
Un(e) jeune francais(e) a decide de changer ses habitudes pour etre en meilleure forme. Il/Elle essaie de convaincre un(e) ami(e) de faire du sport avec lui/elle et de changer leurs habitudes. Son ami(e) n'a pas envie de changer! Avec un(e) camarade, inventez une conversation entre ces deux personnes et jouez la scene pour la classe.
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