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For the underlined phrase or sentence, choose the revision that most improves the writing. Personally, I would rather read A. a poem without rhyme than a tired old rhyming idea. B. a poem without rhyme than a tired old one C. a poem without rhyme than one with a tired old rhyme. D. Correct as is
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1 of 2To improve this sentence, the second noun rhyme should be replaced with the word one, as in revision C. That way, the parallel structure remains, and there is no unnecessary repetition.
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