Rewrite the following sentences to correct any errors in the use of abbreviations.

Example 1. The accident occurred at 6:23 PM on Dec. 28, 1999. $\underline{\text{The accident occurred at 6:23 P.M. on December 28, 1999.}}$

10. Please have the manuscript to me by Tues., Sept. 12, 2001, at four o'clock PM. $\underline{\phantom{\text{The horse with the sllvery mane and white tall was chosen by the photographer.}}}$

Write five sentences, following the instructions in parentheses.

Example 1. (Write a sentence that includes an imperative direct quotation.) $\underline{\text{"Watch out for that tree limb!" shouted the tour guide.}}$

10. (Write a sentence that includes an exclamatory direct quotation.) $\underline{\phantom{\text{The horse with the sllvery mane and white tall was chosen by the photographer.}}}$

Most of the following sentences contain a comma error. Insert commas where they are needed, and cross out any commas that are incorrect. If a sentence is already punctuated correctly, write $C$ before the item number.

Example 1. Some areas of Alaska are so remote$\cancel{\text{,}}$ that they can be reached only by plane.

10. Paneok loves to fly and the beauty of Alaska, and the needs of her fellow Alaskans make the risk worthwhile.

Add commas where they are needed in the following sentences. Cross out any unnecessary commas. If a sentence is already correct, write $C$ before the item number.

Example 1. Tom , would you prefer a glass of lemonade $\cancel{\text{,}}$ or a bottle of water?

1. The sunlight through the leaves cast dark trembling shadows on the ground.

On the line provided before each sentence, write $N$ if the underlined clause or phrase is nonessential or $E$ if it is essential. Then, add commas as needed.

Example 1. $\underline{\text{N}}$ The Lees, $\underline{\text{who came here from Hong Kong}}$, live upstairs.

$\underline{\phantom{\text{The horse}}}$ 1. People $\underline{\text{who like anchovies and garlic}}$ will enjoy this pizza.

A Insert periods where appropriate in the following sentences.

Example 1. Have you ever read The Empire of the Sun by $J. G.$ Ballard?

1. The class is taught by Prof Glendon L Hynes of Ferris State University.

On the line provided, write the abbreviated version of each of the following place names.

Example 1. 623 Lilac Street, Big Rapids, Michigan $\underline{\text{623 Lilac St., Big Rapids, Mich.}}$

1. South Congress Avenue $\underline{\phantom{\text{The horse with the sllvery mane and white tall was chosen by the photographer.}}}$

Add end marks and commas where they are needed in the following sentences.

Example 1. Is María R . Sanchez , M . D . , the staff doctor for Talmadge $\&$ Co . ?

1. When the presentation was over Ella and Bob met with the mayor.

Add the appropriate end mark to each of the following sentences. If quotation marks should precede or follow the end mark, write them in the proper place.

Example 1. Ulani shouted, "Watch out for that bus ! "

1. The first thing she said to me was, "Where did you get that haircut

On the line provided, write the acronym for each of the following word groups.

Example $\underline{\text{UFO}}$ 1. unidentified flying object

$\underline{\phantom{\text{The horse.}}}$ 1. Public Broadcasting System

Add commas where they are needed in each of the following sentences. If a sentence is already correct, write $C$ before the item number.

Example 1. Waiting in line for tickets, the tourists became bored and impatient.

1. Entering the store we were greeted by huge crowds.

Most of the following sentences contain a comma error. Insert commas where they are needed, and cross out any commas that are incorrect. If a sentence is already punctuated correctly, write $C$ before the item number.

Example 1. Would you please repeat the question for Seth$\cancel{\text{,}}$ and me , Ms. Miles?

1. She spent a week in Los Angeles California, but she did not visit Hollywood or Beverly Hills.

Equiano, an African sold into slavery in North America, makes a strong case against slavery. In the passage above, Equiano uses an unusual but effective strategy. Rather than using declarative sentences to make his point, Equiano uses interrogative sentences. Is this a choice that you would have expected? Why or why not?

Add commas where they are needed in the following sentences. If the sentence is already correct, write $C$ before the item number.

Example 1. Dora rode her bicycle down the street, through the park, and along the trail.

1. Marcelo threw a long wobbly pass to the halfback, who caught it in the end zone.